Blossempaw of windclan

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Blossempaw of windclan

Post  Star on Sat 09 Jan 2010, 10:49 am

Name- Blossempaw
Gender- female
Age- 7 months
Clan- Windclan
Rank-Apprentice

Looks- A black cat with red tipped furs. She has Deep brown eyes that seem to be black. Her paws are a bit daintier than others.

Personality- She is rather sweet, and kind. Blossempaw can act like a spoiled brat but mostly to other clans. She would do anything toprotect her clan, and mostly the kits. She had a odd atraction to the kits, and loves being near the nursery.Blossempaw also seems to like being near toms.

History- Born as a kit she seldom left the nursery. She would lay there never wantingto leave. Even as a apprentice she wuld often vist her mother, and her father. Blossempaw fought hard still training she has promise to be a great warrior. Her mother died giveing birth to her 2nd litter of kits. On kit survived. Blossempaw takes care of the remainiing kit. With her last breath her mother named the kit Bluekit said goodbye, and died.

Name- Bluekit(berry)
Gender- Male
Age- 4 moons
Clan-Windclan
Rank- Kit

Looks-A dark russein blue coat with a lighter russien blue tabby markings. His nose is black like his sister's. His paws are slightly larger than a normal cat. His pads are white. Blueberrykit has deep amber eyes with a hint of green eyes.

Personality-As a kit he is very playful. He whines for his sister when she leaves. He loves being near her.
As a apprentice he settles down al little. He still is very close to his sister though, but pays more attenion to training. As a warrior he is ver clam, and gentlemanlike. Hemakes sure that the toms aren't to busy to the she-cat's. He also makes sure the she-cat arn't to demanding.

History-His mother died when he was born along with his siblings. His sister cares for him inbetween training.


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Re: Blossempaw of windclan

Post  Sandfur on Sat 09 Jan 2010, 12:15 pm

two things:

cats cannot have red eyes

change the name of blueberrykit. warrior cats names contain always only 2 syllables. one describtion and kit/paw/...
you can give him his warrior name as blueberry and be it bluekit for example.


i like the history of both, blossompaw taking care for bluekit ^^
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Re: Blossempaw of windclan

Post  Star on Sat 09 Jan 2010, 1:56 pm

thank you
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Re: Blossempaw of windclan

Post  Rain on Sat 09 Jan 2010, 2:40 pm

I say it's approved. Sand, if anything else is wrong, let me know. otherwise, Shadow, u can start rping.
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